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20 Amazing Pictures of Rain Drops | Incredible Snaps

no designed gem creation
gathers my stunned elation like earth's jangling flirtation
of dazzling rain drops forming on a green leaf foundation -
a pertly dancing sensation 
garners my soul's ovation

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Susan Ashley

Date: 11/21/2017 8:28:00 PM

CayCay, I love your title and I love this bijou of a poem. Precious and scintillating! Belated congrats my talented friend!!

Mark Martin

Date: 3/12/2017 3:38:00 PM

Nothing beats nature in beauty. Congratulations on your win CayCay! :-)

Funom Makama

Date: 3/6/2017 10:46:00 AM

This is wonderful. you have once again produced another masterpiece which is a true testament of your reputation in this wonderful community. Thanks a lot for the share.

Paul Callus

Date: 3/4/2017 9:03:00 AM

This pearly creation is beautiful, CayCay...or should I say...dazzling! Warm regards // paul

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 3/2/2017 1:29:00 AM

Beautiful trans creation. Done nicely. ENjoyed reading it.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/26/2017 7:03:00 PM

this is super snazzy, Caycay!!! Love it. And congrats. Soupmail.

Jan Allison

Date: 2/26/2017 4:14:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats CayCay:-) hugs Jan xx

Agnes Krampe

Date: 2/26/2017 2:35:00 PM

Congrats, dear CayCay.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/26/2017 11:39:00 AM

cay, ohh a jewel of a poem 'like earth's jangling selection'... enjoyed this to bit; happy congrats on your win and thanks for supporting my contest.. huggs

James Inman

Date: 2/24/2017 8:21:00 AM

I wonder at the beauty of nature every day. Lovely CayCay

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/23/2017 6:13:00 PM

CLever one with the rhyme and message, CAycay. I really like it. Nette comes up with such popular themes for us, doesn't she?

Jannie Breedt

Date: 2/23/2017 1:59:00 AM

Wow crazy! The combination of the photo and your words makes a treasure. Jangling? What an exquisite word. You keep improving all the time

Probir Gupta

Date: 2/22/2017 8:13:00 AM

What a transcreation ... Lovely ...

Joanna Daniel

Date: 2/22/2017 7:21:00 AM

I wholeheartedly agree, CayCay:) a 7:)

Chris Green

Date: 2/22/2017 7:20:00 AM

Absolutely beautiful CayCay. I believe I have read most of the entries so far for this contest and every one I come across is so enchanting and wonderful. The graphic really has inspired some special poetry and yours my friend I really adore.