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Rain Jewels

no designed gem creation
gathers my stunned elation like earth's jangling flirtation
of dazzling rain drops forming on a green leaf foundation -
a pertly dancing sensation 
garners my soul's ovation

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David Crandall

December 4, 2025 at 10:26 AM

Great language! "stunned elation", "soul's ovation", pretty good that you could get all the right words and while having them rhyme - applause, applause!

Susan Ashley

November 21, 2017 at 8:28 PM

CayCay, I love your title and I love this bijou of a poem. Precious and scintillating! Belated congrats my talented friend!!

Mark Martin

March 12, 2017 at 3:38 PM

Nothing beats nature in beauty. Congratulations on your win CayCay! :-)

Funom Makama

March 6, 2017 at 10:46 AM

This is wonderful. you have once again produced another masterpiece which is a true testament of your reputation in this wonderful community. Thanks a lot for the share.

Paul Callus

March 4, 2017 at 9:03 AM

This pearly creation is beautiful, CayCay...or should I say...dazzling! Warm regards // paul

Ravi Sathasivam

March 2, 2017 at 1:29 AM

Beautiful trans creation. Done nicely. ENjoyed reading it.

Andrea Dietrich

February 26, 2017 at 7:03 PM

this is super snazzy, Caycay!!! Love it. And congrats. Soupmail.

Jan Allison

February 26, 2017 at 4:14 PM

Dropping back with my congrats CayCay:-) hugs Jan xx

Agnes Krampe

February 26, 2017 at 2:35 PM

Congrats, dear CayCay.

Nette Onclaud

February 26, 2017 at 11:39 AM

cay, ohh a jewel of a poem 'like earth's jangling selection'... enjoyed this to bit; happy congrats on your win and thanks for supporting my contest.. huggs

James Inman

February 24, 2017 at 8:21 AM

I wonder at the beauty of nature every day. Lovely CayCay

Andrea Dietrich

February 23, 2017 at 6:13 PM

CLever one with the rhyme and message, CAycay. I really like it. Nette comes up with such popular themes for us, doesn't she?

Jannie Breedt

February 23, 2017 at 1:59 AM

Wow crazy! The combination of the photo and your words makes a treasure. Jangling? What an exquisite word. You keep improving all the time

Probir Gupta

February 22, 2017 at 8:13 AM

What a transcreation ... Lovely ...

Joanna Daniel

February 22, 2017 at 7:21 AM

I wholeheartedly agree, CayCay:) a 7:)

Chris Green

February 22, 2017 at 7:20 AM

Absolutely beautiful CayCay. I believe I have read most of the entries so far for this contest and every one I come across is so enchanting and wonderful. The graphic really has inspired some special poetry and yours my friend I really adore.