Rain hiku

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Date written: 05/18/2025

here comes spring d o w n p o u r e y e s trained on the windowpanes ~ tapping of raind r o p s

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Janice Canerdy

Date: 5/22/2025 11:13:00 AM

Excellent haiku, Edward. CONGRATS on your win. Janice

Krishnanand Guptar

Date: 5/21/2025 9:18:00 AM

Congratulations dear poet on your top placement in this contest with a pleasant write on spring rain cat in a cool way. Wish you a pleasant day.

Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/21/2025 12:59:00 PM

Thank you very much, Krishnanand:-)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/18/2025 12:11:00 PM

What a creative/fun "Rain hiku" write you have here. Love It... Have a fun day writing away...............

Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/19/2025 5:39:00 AM

Thank you very much, Paula:-)