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Date written: 05/18/2025

Rain hiku


here comes spring d
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tapping of raind
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Canerdy Avatar
May 22, 2025 at 11:13 AM
Excellent haiku, Edward. CONGRATS on your win. Janice
Guptar Avatar
May 21, 2025 at 9:18 AM
Congratulations dear poet on your top placement in this contest with a pleasant write on spring rain cat in a cool way. Wish you a pleasant day.
Ibeh Avatar
May 21, 2025 at 12:59 PM
Thank you very much, Krishnanand:-)
Goldsmith Avatar
May 18, 2025 at 12:11 PM
What a creative/fun "Rain hiku" write you have here. Love It... Have a fun day writing away...............
Ibeh Avatar
May 19, 2025 at 5:39 AM
Thank you very much, Paula:-)
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