Rain Haiku

and the rain that fell
was not cleansing or gentle 
it was only wet
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Kendrick Avatar
July 26, 2009 at 4:10 PM
Love this Haiku. I can feel it coming down. Sara
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July 26, 2009 at 7:49 AM
Got a chuckle out of this one. Reminds me of the times we had downpours with feet of water in the street and water seeping in the basement. The last line conveys it well. Keep on writing. Karen
Doggett Avatar
July 26, 2009 at 6:33 AM
Great Haiku J.B., very subtle, Bill
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July 25, 2009 at 11:43 PM
Nice haiku JB, a great fierce muse...Raul
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