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Rain Haiku

and the rain that fell was not cleansing or gentle it was only wet

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/26/2009 4:10:00 PM
Love this Haiku. I can feel it coming down. Sara
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Date: 7/26/2009 7:49:00 AM
Got a chuckle out of this one. Reminds me of the times we had downpours with feet of water in the street and water seeping in the basement. The last line conveys it well. Keep on writing. Karen
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Date: 7/26/2009 6:33:00 AM
Great Haiku J.B., very subtle, Bill
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Date: 7/25/2009 11:43:00 PM
Nice haiku JB, a great fierce muse...Raul
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