Rain Girl

rain falls rain falls down
the girl walks in rain
inside she fills, fills and drowns
and she isn't going anywhere

tears fill tears fill eyes
the girl tries to hold on
she tries tries not to cry
and she is holding it in

he smack, he smacks her
the girl remains in silence
she's just, just a girl
and she can't cry tonight
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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May 31, 2009 at 4:52 PM
get a caste iron frying pan and do unto others what they would do unto you.......you need an >s> on smacks..Light & Love and ..ignore my advise just leave
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