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Rain From a Heavy Sky

Seems like dark clouds are following us Let the torrents come down We'll survive! As water strikes our garden The earth and roots devours it Life springs forth after shadows have passed Our little star will continue to shine on though the night There will be movement of the wheel of fate When we are cleansed by the rain Then we can begin anew Letting the breezes caress us We'll continue onwards darkness, rain and ill fortune may come but we shall grow and prosper in spite of it We'll lift up our arms to embrace the world Laugh once more as spring rains continue to fall

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/25/2010 2:42:00 AM
An uplifting write, with the promise that with rain comes renewal in almost every aspect.. Love this Matthew.. Thanks for your comments as well :) wilma
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Date: 5/8/2010 9:43:00 PM
this is an inspiring write of yours Matthew.even through the darkness, may we always find the stregth to move on forward.i like how you use the cleansing of the rain.it fits the process of meding so well. -Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 3/10/2010 2:01:00 AM
Such an uplifting poem, Matthew--over here we've been experiencing the effects of El Nino and reading your poem reminded me just how to be grateful when the rains arrive :) Nice, refreshing write!
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Date: 2/25/2010 11:36:00 AM
What a wonderful poem. I realy enjoyed the read. I can't wait for the worlds laugh...
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Date: 2/14/2010 6:55:00 PM
You are a prophet, Matthew! Believe it or not, you are. As I said before, you are special! God bless. Peace, Audrey
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Date: 2/14/2010 2:21:00 PM
Very nice poem,Matthew..Beautiful..Charma
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Date: 2/12/2010 12:10:00 PM
This poem is very optimistic and is like a song of thankfulness despite what rains may fall. I like your style. LUv, Andrea ps were you the one that mentioned Dandelions by rolling stones? I don't think I ever heard that one!
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Date: 2/4/2010 12:50:00 PM
Hello Matthew: Fantastic poem (I liked the way you typed it too). I really liked the line about the star shining into the night...bravo!!! Yours truly: Sheol
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Date: 2/4/2010 8:51:00 AM
As the spring of rain continues to fall, life will never be abated. For rain is love's intention of new life itself. This is top notch weaving of lyrics into meaning Matthew. A pleasurable presentation. Sincerely, Moses
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Date: 2/3/2010 7:00:00 AM
I enjoyed reading you poem this morning Matthew. Thank you for posting and sharing with us. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/2/2010 2:45:00 PM
i love it. i read it a few times. its a wonderful write.
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Date: 2/2/2010 9:47:00 AM
Great attitude!
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Date: 2/2/2010 9:29:00 AM
Great attitude to have since we can't do anything about it. Sara
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Date: 2/2/2010 8:14:00 AM
Brilliant title...great write too..TAH
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