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Rain For Days

rain for days--
forgotten soldier's clothes
sag on the line

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Date: 1/4/2016 12:22:00 PM
awesome write. SKAT
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Date: 11/13/2010 9:06:00 AM
Good morning! Phuc, love the haiku! I was waiting to get back on the soup to read about Chris A., and his friend,, What a name, I'm not even gonna ask where you got it from, to cool to know. By the way if Chris has mentioned me and told you i was a bad poet he is wrong,,lol,.. that would be Kidding by the way , my name is P.D. and yes I'm a she. Your name is very suiting. Enjoyed ,..p.d.
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Date: 11/7/2010 12:05:00 PM
Hey Phong, Thanks for the comment on my Haiku...even though you said that you liked it?? I found out it wasn't so good..but thanks anyway... and I'm sure to the children in your country 'though the weather is warm, the lights bring much cheer. Christmas night with the stars and brightest moonlight, just has to be a spectacular sight to behold!! ...Audrey
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Date: 11/6/2010 11:14:00 AM
A touching write, Phong...Your haiku(s) are great! Enjoyed reading you! Emilia
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Date: 11/4/2010 9:48:00 AM
very downcaste strong mood! I love it. Perhaps you read Cha-Ching...and let me know your thoughts also I SURE could use a haiku mentor! Light & Love
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Date: 11/4/2010 8:39:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your work this morn..I can clearly see the scene..Rain a time for fun inside..Welcome to soup ...May your stay be lone with many more excellent post as this one..Sara
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Date: 11/2/2010 11:02:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Phong. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you as a new member and us oldies also may enter. If you have questions please feel free to ask ANYONE here. We are ALL willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/2/2010 8:53:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup. .. so enjoyed reading your poetry today with its creative theme on rain.. hope u check out the contest page offered to members.. good luck with luv..
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Date: 11/1/2010 9:07:00 PM
Phong, glad to see how you finally registered on the Soup! But you are practically forcing me to break my own 'break' from the Soup, by checking out your first posts! Uhmm, I really appreciate your critiques of my poems a lot( I have been starving for it!), but I am not sure if other people will enjoy critiques on their poems!? Soupers generally enjoy 'pats on the back' or, "Congratulations....etc." Tread lightly, my man! Haha!~Chris
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Date: 11/1/2010 7:19:00 PM
Welcome to the Soup, Phong ^_^ --such a sad haiku--I liked the image that you put here and of how you bring forth an underlying message--enjoyed reading this-- & thanks for dropping by my poems :), happy that Chris introduced you to this site, and good luck in not finding it too addictive ;)-- will soupmail you in a bit ... nikko :)
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Date: 11/1/2010 3:02:00 PM
Beautiful write my friend...great poetry
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