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Rain Dance Dreamer

I’m just another rain dance dreamer staring at the window sill Watching every drop that dances with its destiny to fill Funny, how the rain keeps calling taunting me to wonder still As I watch each tiny dancer pirouette with flawless skill Counting every crystal dodger great escape for me until Once again, this rain dance dreamer wakes upon the morning chill

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Date: 2/4/2022 6:15:00 AM
You write beautifully Mike! Debx
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Mike Gentile
Date: 2/4/2022 11:28:00 AM
You are so very kind! Thanks Deb xxoo
Date: 2/3/2022 12:36:00 AM
I love to see the rain after a long hot dry spell, it brings everything back to life and makes the air fresh again. Tom
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Mike Gentile
Date: 2/3/2022 4:01:00 AM
It is lovely, isn't it! Thanks Tom!!!
Date: 2/2/2022 3:32:00 PM
Hello Mike Wow, Wow! I love this poem. I can jus see the rain dancer. Happy Wednesday. xxxx-oooo.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/3/2022 10:57:00 AM
Hello Mike, Happy Thursday to you. ....
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Mike Gentile
Date: 2/2/2022 7:03:00 PM
Thank you Darlene, Happy Wednesday!!!
Date: 2/2/2022 9:42:00 AM
Simply exquisite, Mike. Its imagery is stunning, too. I loved it. Reminded me of times, as a youngster, when I would stare out the window at the rain and wish I could get out and play.
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Date: 2/2/2022 8:35:00 AM
Awesome poetry. Simply wonderful Mike.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 2/2/2022 7:02:00 PM
Thank you very much Vijay !!
Date: 2/2/2022 7:25:00 AM
I love how you appreciate and observe the beauty of rain Mike. I have always adored the rain. “ As I watch each tiny dancer pirouette with flawless skill”. This is a Fave for me. Blessings xxoo
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Mike Gentile
Date: 2/2/2022 7:02:00 PM
Thanks Connie, I'm so glad you liked it !!
Date: 2/2/2022 7:06:00 AM
Oh , I love this and the title too. So nice. a fave for me. :)
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Mike Gentile
Date: 2/2/2022 7:02:00 PM
Thanks so much Heidi xxoo

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