Mike Gentile Poet Rhyme

Rain Dance Dreamer

I’m just another rain dance dreamer
                      staring at the window sill
Watching every drop that dances
                            with its destiny to fill

Funny, how the rain keeps calling
                   taunting me to wonder still
As I watch each tiny dancer
                   pirouette with flawless skill

Counting every crystal dodger
                      great escape for me until
Once again, this rain dance dreamer
                wakes upon the morning chill

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Deb M February 4, 2022 at 6:15 AM You write beautifully Mike! Debx Mike Gentile February 4, 2022 at 11:28 AM You are so very kind! Thanks Deb xxoo

Tom Cunningham February 3, 2022 at 12:36 AM I love to see the rain after a long hot dry spell, it brings everything back to life and makes the air fresh again. Tom Mike Gentile February 3, 2022 at 4:01 AM It is lovely, isn't it! Thanks Tom!!!

Darlene De Beaulieu February 2, 2022 at 3:32 PM Hello Mike Wow, Wow! I love this poem. I can jus see the rain dancer. Happy Wednesday. xxxx-oooo. Darlene De Beaulieu February 3, 2022 at 10:57 AM Hello Mike, Happy Thursday to you. .... Mike Gentile February 2, 2022 at 7:03 PM Thank you Darlene, Happy Wednesday!!!

L Milton Hankins February 2, 2022 at 9:42 AM Simply exquisite, Mike. Its imagery is stunning, too. I loved it. Reminded me of times, as a youngster, when I would stare out the window at the rain and wish I could get out and play.

Vijay Pandit February 2, 2022 at 8:35 AM Awesome poetry. Simply wonderful Mike. Mike Gentile February 2, 2022 at 7:02 PM Thank you very much Vijay !!

Connie Marcum Wong February 2, 2022 at 7:25 AM I love how you appreciate and observe the beauty of rain Mike. I have always adored the rain. “ As I watch each tiny dancer pirouette with flawless skill”. This is a Fave for me. Blessings xxoo Mike Gentile February 2, 2022 at 7:02 PM Thanks Connie, I'm so glad you liked it !!

Heidi Sands February 2, 2022 at 7:06 AM Oh , I love this and the title too. So nice. a fave for me. :) Mike Gentile February 2, 2022 at 7:02 PM Thanks so much Heidi xxoo