Rain Dance

Come take my hand the weather is fine Walking together in the summer sunshine All of a sudden it starts to get dark So hurry to shelter in the local park We huddle together in the kiosk door Cuddled up with the man I adore Then suddenly you grab my hand We dance in the rain by the old bandstand Our clothes and hair get soaking wet We are so in love we do not fret Back to your house we do retire To snuggle in front of a roaring fire It is there in the glow that you take my hand Kneel and propose – now I understand You are the one I’ve looked for all my life I’m honoured to say ‘Yes, I’ll be your wife’ Jan Allison 9th August 2014

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Robin Davis

Date: 8/12/2014 9:39:00 PM

Jan This is such a charmingly sweet and romantic write. So full of love and passion. "Yes" to this wonderful write. Thank you for the awesome comment on my Heroes poem.

Jan Allison
Date: 8/13/2014 3:35:00 AM

Thank you so much for the lovely comment as ever Robin:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Robert Lindley

Date: 8/10/2014 2:07:00 PM

Give that man a second chance!! Fantastic writer my friend. A real pleasure to read!!!!!

Jan Allison
Date: 8/10/2014 2:10:00 PM

I proposed to my husband 25 years ago Robert - so it's not going to happen to me but maybe will inspire someone else:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Faye Gibson

Date: 8/10/2014 12:45:00 PM

Beautiful, Jan; nice flow and rhyme.

Jan Allison
Date: 8/10/2014 12:59:00 PM

Thank you so much for the lovely comment Faye i do appreciate the feedback:-) Hugs Jan xx

Harry Horsman

Date: 8/10/2014 7:39:00 AM

move over,,Singing in the rain, so much joy here Jan,, love this.....

Jan Allison
Date: 8/10/2014 9:16:00 AM

This is the second rain inspired poem I wrote this weekend - oh the joys of the gold old British weather! Thanks for the lovely comment Harry:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Casarah Nance

Date: 8/9/2014 3:11:00 PM

Awesome!! It must be a rainy day happy muse today :)

Jan Allison
Date: 8/9/2014 4:28:00 PM

Must be as I've done rain poems two days running now lol. Hugs Jan xxx

Tim Smith

Date: 8/9/2014 2:04:00 PM

Oh Jan I hope you said yes...so beautiful...hugs Tim

Jan Allison
Date: 8/9/2014 2:06:00 PM

If I got a second chance Tim I would LOL Hugs Jan xxx