Jan Allison Poet Rhyme

Rain Dance

Come take my hand the weather is fine
Walking together in the summer sunshine
All of a sudden it starts to get dark
So hurry to shelter in the local park

We huddle together in the kiosk door
Cuddled up with the man I adore
Then suddenly you grab my hand
We dance in the rain by the old bandstand

Our clothes and hair get soaking wet
We are so in love we do not fret
Back to your house we do retire
To snuggle in front of a roaring fire

It is there in the glow that you take my hand
Kneel and propose – now I understand 
You are the one I’ve looked for all my life
I’m honoured to say ‘Yes, I’ll be your wife’

Jan Allison
9th August 2014

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Robin Davis August 12, 2014 at 9:39 PM Jan This is such a charmingly sweet and romantic write. So full of love and passion. "Yes" to this wonderful write. Thank you for the awesome comment on my Heroes poem. Jan Allison August 13, 2014 at 3:35 AM Thank you so much for the lovely comment as ever Robin:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Robert Lindley August 10, 2014 at 2:07 PM Give that man a second chance!! Fantastic writer my friend. A real pleasure to read!!!!! Jan Allison August 10, 2014 at 2:10 PM I proposed to my husband 25 years ago Robert - so it's not going to happen to me but maybe will inspire someone else:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Faye Gibson August 10, 2014 at 12:45 PM Beautiful, Jan; nice flow and rhyme. Jan Allison August 10, 2014 at 12:59 PM Thank you so much for the lovely comment Faye i do appreciate the feedback:-) Hugs Jan xx

Harry Horsman August 10, 2014 at 7:39 AM move over,,Singing in the rain, so much joy here Jan,, love this..... Jan Allison August 10, 2014 at 9:16 AM This is the second rain inspired poem I wrote this weekend - oh the joys of the gold old British weather! Thanks for the lovely comment Harry:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Casarah Nance August 9, 2014 at 3:11 PM Awesome!! It must be a rainy day happy muse today :) Jan Allison August 9, 2014 at 4:28 PM Must be as I've done rain poems two days running now lol. Hugs Jan xxx

Tim Smith August 9, 2014 at 2:04 PM Oh Jan I hope you said yes...so beautiful...hugs Tim Jan Allison August 9, 2014 at 2:06 PM If I got a second chance Tim I would LOL Hugs Jan xxx