Mohan Chutani Poet Triolet

Rain Dance

rain poured down cats and dogs and the worms
raven, pigeon and skylark feasted on them and soil
children swam in ponds and played polo by turns
rain poured down cats and dogs and the worms
grass hopper speedily hopped to come to terms 
snail left its hole and played around chess and recoil
rain poured down cats and dogs and the worms
raven, pigeon and skylark feasted on them and soil

Date: 9.8.2014

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Sara Kendrick October 2, 2014 at 9:26 AM Thank you for participating in my contest..I am sorry to be so long in saying my congrats to each one..I enjoyed reading this one..Sara

Brenda Meier-Hans September 22, 2014 at 1:04 PM Grasshopper speedily hopped to come to terms, I love it. Congratulations on your win Mohan

Paul Callus September 21, 2014 at 3:42 PM Lovely poem Mohan....rain seems to be an instigator of many things! Enjoyed the various creatures that take advantage of the falling rain. Congrats on your win in Sara's contest. // paul

Sara Kendrick September 20, 2014 at 8:24 AM I liked this one because we used to have a saying it was raining cats and dogs when I was a child ..It brought back memories..Thanks for participating in my contest..Sara

Len Gasun August 10, 2014 at 11:45 AM An awesome triolet you've penned my dear friend Mohan. I enjoyed reading your poem. Thank u so much. Have a great day! love lots and big hugs, Leonora

Jan Allison August 9, 2014 at 8:03 AM This made me smile - they have 'worm charming' contests over here - amazing how many of the little worms rise to the surface! Hugs Jan xxx Mohan Chutani August 9, 2014 at 9:24 AM interesting, never heard of it before. Thanks for your visit Jan.

Tim Smith August 9, 2014 at 7:37 AM So much life brought out in the rain...cheers Tim Mohan Chutani August 9, 2014 at 9:25 AM yes, Tim. rain brings something for each living being on earth, I guess. Thanks for the visit. Mohan