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rain poured down cats and dogs and the worms raven, pigeon and skylark feasted on them and soil children swam in ponds and played polo by turns rain poured down cats and dogs and the worms grass hopper speedily hopped to come to terms snail left its hole and played around chess and recoil rain poured down cats and dogs and the worms raven, pigeon and skylark feasted on them and soil Date: 9.8.2014

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Date: 10/2/2014 9:26:00 AM
Thank you for participating in my contest..I am sorry to be so long in saying my congrats to each one..I enjoyed reading this one..Sara
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Date: 9/22/2014 1:04:00 PM
Grasshopper speedily hopped to come to terms, I love it. Congratulations on your win Mohan
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Date: 9/21/2014 3:42:00 PM
Lovely poem Mohan....rain seems to be an instigator of many things! Enjoyed the various creatures that take advantage of the falling rain. Congrats on your win in Sara's contest. // paul
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Date: 9/20/2014 8:24:00 AM
I liked this one because we used to have a saying it was raining cats and dogs when I was a child ..It brought back memories..Thanks for participating in my contest..Sara
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Date: 8/10/2014 11:45:00 AM
An awesome triolet you've penned my dear friend Mohan. I enjoyed reading your poem. Thank u so much. Have a great day! love lots and big hugs, Leonora
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Date: 8/9/2014 8:03:00 AM
This made me smile - they have 'worm charming' contests over here - amazing how many of the little worms rise to the surface! Hugs Jan xxx
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 8/9/2014 9:24:00 AM
interesting, never heard of it before. Thanks for your visit Jan.
Date: 8/9/2014 7:37:00 AM
So much life brought out in the rain...cheers Tim
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 8/9/2014 9:25:00 AM
yes, Tim. rain brings something for each living being on earth, I guess. Thanks for the visit. Mohan

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