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Rain Dance

Do you see the rain dance no drop at a still stance, pitter pattering all around bouncing back to the ground Steady there while you sit as atop your head they hit, each one is an invitation and a newfound inspiration No more need to stay inside or under an umbrella hide, simply set your soles free leave all your troubles be You can see the rain dance live a little, take a chance, lasts only a minute or two later on skies will be blue The skin will feel every drip fresh enough to take a sip, falling so freely in the air let them tangle in your hair Two together become one washed over by innocent fun, to thoroughly enjoy the soak before the clouds above broke If rain could it might smile because for a short while, here under the circumstance you decided to join their dance.

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Date: 1/15/2020 2:52:00 PM
I really enjoyed this poem. The rhyme and the story of the rain from beginning to end was just wonderful a well-written poem. Your friend....,Roger
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 3/9/2020 5:59:00 PM
Thanks so much Roger... I'm really glad you enjoyed my poem :)
Date: 10/14/2019 11:43:00 AM
Hello Kelly, I see the rain dance every time the wind blows and the trees branches sway to the beat of the wind. Have a nice day my friend.
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 12/17/2019 9:01:00 PM
Hello there Darlene... Thank you for taking the time to read and comment so kindly on my poem :)
Date: 6/27/2019 7:22:00 AM
You've got it...I'm really impressed...You write for the people...
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 7/25/2019 8:56:00 PM
Thank you for taking the time to read and comment so kindly on my poems... I appreciate that very much Arturo... And I do believe that poetry should be written for the enjoyment of the reader :)
Date: 2/16/2019 9:00:00 AM
A truly delightful rain dance, Kelly. I'm tempted to join in and rekindle my childhood experiences! Hope you are keeping well, my friend. Warm regards // paul
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 3/17/2019 9:39:00 PM
Many thanks my friend ... I am doing fine and I hope you are too. It is so nice to see that spring is finally arriving after the harsh winter season we've had this year :)
Date: 2/15/2019 10:00:00 AM
Hi Kelly, I love the rain just walking along as it falls upon me. I lose myself in such moments. Your words filled me with fun and peace. I have enjoyed this wonderful write. It brings back many wonderful memories to me. Have a wonderful Friday. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 3/12/2019 10:59:00 PM
Many thanks ... I'm glad you enjoyed reading this Mike ... I really do enjoy the rainy days too. As a matter of fact, it is raining right now as I am typing this, and its such a welcome change from all of the snow we've been getting this winter ... Spring is finally here, I think! :)
Date: 11/7/2018 6:45:00 PM
Love the rhyming poem. Love the rain as long as there is no lightning .. My oldest granddaughter lived in Arizona where they get almost no rain.. When she came to visit the silly girl just danced out in the rain it was a joy to see.
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 2/21/2019 11:07:00 PM
Many thanks Eve... I sure can relate to that feeling of joy. There is nothing quite as invigorating as fresh rain showers and getting caught in them :)
Date: 10/27/2018 11:06:00 PM
Mmm fresh enough to take a sip - Nature Boy is back
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 10/27/2018 11:33:00 PM
Welcome back Nature Boy! Its good to see you again :)
Date: 9/30/2018 8:26:00 PM
Nice one
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 2/17/2019 9:18:00 PM
Thanks for reading :)
Date: 9/26/2018 7:37:00 AM
Lovely raindrops are never alone, they always seem to be having a party. A fun write Kelly.
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 2/6/2019 9:46:00 PM
Many thanks James... So glad you enjoyed this :)
Date: 9/15/2018 1:04:00 PM
Nice one Kelly, good to read your pen again, hope things are going well with you. Blessings,Gordon
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 2/6/2019 9:37:00 PM
Many thanks Gordon ... I am doing fine despite this very cold winter season we are experiencing this year. Just trying to hang in there until spring :)
Date: 9/4/2018 5:14:00 PM
I love this free spirited lovely poem Kelly. Beautiful! : )
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 2/6/2019 9:27:00 PM
Many thanks Connie :)
Date: 8/24/2018 4:02:00 AM
Kelly I love your care free Rain Dance.. sometimes we live in an environment that promotes steady, risk-free, living and we miss the fun and adventure that surrounds us everyday. Every once in awhile it’s good to drop the umbrella and dance in the rain.. I love this work!
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 2/3/2019 9:47:00 PM
Many thanks Lyric Man ... I totally agree with your comment. Its not often enough that we stop taking life so seriously and just enjoy the simple things that are constantly all around us!
Date: 8/2/2018 6:35:00 AM
magnificent poem , coming from one who loves to rhyme..very nice kelly
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 2/3/2019 9:19:00 PM
Many thanks Jim ... I love rhyme, too, although at times it can be difficult to write a poem that both rhymes and flows freely.

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