Rain Collection

distant thunderheads
vast golden plains turned cold gray~
wild horses run free

torrential rain storms
rivers overrun leveys~
bears feast on salmon

cool morning drizzle
freezing announces winter~
cocoons await spring
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Andresen Avatar
October 10, 2022 at 11:03 AM
~ Congratulations on your winning poem ~
Dietrich Avatar
October 9, 2022 at 8:26 AM
I like how live creatures were used in the last line of each one. WEll done, and congrats.
Sands Avatar
October 9, 2022 at 5:52 AM
Congratulations for your win. Well written :)
Kitchin Avatar
October 9, 2022 at 5:41 AM
Peter, congratulations on your winning placement with your lovely poems, love the nature scenes!
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