Joanna Daniel Poet Rhyme

Rain Can Reign

Diamond droplets drip drip from the azure sky, 
Creating plashes that soon won't dry,
Water overflows my lane, 
Forming aqua train,
Sprays my face,
Rain!
See this place - 
How dark clouds can reign!
Dousing both mountains and plain,
It looks like black billows too can cry,
Diamond droplets drip drip from the azure sky.


07.12.2020

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Aditi Mishra July 27, 2020 at 3:21 AM Love your delightful muse of soothing showers of rain Jo. Congratulations on your win. Blessings :)

Andrea Dietrich July 19, 2020 at 3:23 PM It's so wonderful seeing my form being so splendidly represented as I go through Joseph's winner list. Love this, JO. Congrats on your win

Jenna Logan July 19, 2020 at 6:37 AM You've composed a wonderful, and worthy of winning, Andaree, Jo. Congratulations.

Winged Warrior July 19, 2020 at 6:37 AM Congrats!! on your excellent win Jo...very well crafted my friend...^WW^ :o)

Connie Marcum Wong July 18, 2020 at 7:48 PM I love this wonderful Andaree poem Jo. I am putting it into my Faves! I am so pleased it was awarded with First Place. Congratulations my friend. Blessings xxoo

John Watt July 18, 2020 at 5:47 PM Jo, I enjoyed the imagery of rain you molded into a lovely andaree. Loved your alliterations and your title, too. Congrats on your win! ~ John

Janice Canerdy July 18, 2020 at 4:04 PM Vividly descriptive, lovely WINNING poem, Jo! Janice

Joseph May July 18, 2020 at 3:37 PM Diamond droplets reign!, Beautiful write Jo, Congrats on your win

Jan Allison July 18, 2020 at 3:14 PM I especially like the use of alliteration in the repeated line, many congratulations on your win :-) hugs Jan xx

Vijay Pandit July 12, 2020 at 6:13 AM Beautifully done, Jo..impressive how you executed this form.