Rain, Beloved Rain
Softens, in a rain
What hardened, viewing
A world this heart.
Blurs, what of its brutalness
Did bright impart.
Stepping, does one hear
Gentle as dainty
Girl's pit-a-pat.
As adoring, have waited on
My own, in that.
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