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It has rained in waves all night Thunder roared; lightning flashed its light Snuggling down under the covers My sanity trying to recover Wondering about the wild things plight Infinitesimal birds and all resting sights God keep them safe as thunder shakes And preserve us lest we break The rain is needed to make a crop It fills the creeks with each drop Flowing, flowing on ahead Joins another creek outspread Soon the river will be filled And there will be blooms from daffodils All the trees will become spring green And of my love I'll truly dream April will shake her rain drenched hair So May flowers' scent will fill the air Early plants in the garden will be ready We'll gather them though our balance unsteady

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Frances Schiavina

Date: 2/22/2024 10:06:00 AM

Beautiful poem of peace and thunder with all creatures safe in God's embrace.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/22/2024 10:21:00 AM

Frances, you visit was uplifting. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara K

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/13/2024 2:49:00 AM

- We never lack rain in Norway ... all seasons have a lot of rain ... now we have half a meter of snow ... lovely poem, Sara :) - hugs

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/13/2024 7:05:00 AM

Anne-Lise, I guess in most cold climates when it gets cold instead of snow, it snows. I don't know how people deal with it though. You are stronger than me. Thanks for dropping by. Sara K

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 2/12/2024 6:40:00 PM

Dearest, Sara your poem beautifully captures the essence of a rainy night and the hope it brings for renewal and growth. The imagery of thunder, lightning, and the soothing rhythm of raindrops eloquently shows nature's power and beauty. Your concern for the safety of the smallest creatures amidst the storm reflects a deep connection to the world around you. The anticipation of blooming flowers evoke a sense of optimism and longing. Loved every word! I Always Enjoy Reading Your Poems: - Blessings, Daniel

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/13/2024 2:38:00 AM

I do have hope Daniel. Maybe sun today. I think something happened after I went to sleep last night because the clocks were messed up this morning which says the electricity went off at some point. Thanks for your kind review and the Blessings. Sara K

Sam Kauffman

Date: 2/12/2024 12:30:00 PM

Sara, you have written beautifully of the power of hope - the power of restoration and the power of nature to put everything in order! Such impactful and powerful images. We still need rain but it looks like we are in for several wet days at the end of this week. I love to hunker down at night and listen to the cadence of life in raindrops. Blessings and prayers. Hopefully it isn't time to stock the ark!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/12/2024 2:02:00 PM

Sam, God gave us a promise that the earth would not be cleansed by water again so only isolated flooding happens. Our creek was slightly out of its banks at some point. We got around 6 inches of rain in less then 24 hours. They say we will continue to get rain until around 7 tonight and then wind will start up. Thanks for dropping by. Sara K

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/12/2024 10:18:00 AM

A lovely write. We have needed rain. Had some this week. Hooray!!! I love to hear the rain/so peaceful. Have a blessed day writing away..........................

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/12/2024 11:11:00 AM

Why, thank you, Paula. I think we probably have had over 6 inches since about 5:30 P.M. yesterday. It is supposed to end about sundown. Thanks for stopping by. Sara K

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/12/2024 8:49:00 AM

Without rain, the landscape will become a desert. Also needed for drinking.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/12/2024 8:58:00 AM

Victor, and bathing, and cooking and cleaning up(even though we don't like that chore). Thank you, Victor, for the nice review. Sara K

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/12/2024 8:35:00 AM

Loved the personification in this one

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/12/2024 8:57:00 AM

Why thank you, Andrea. I enjoyed writing it after a night of rain. Sara K

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/12/2024 6:21:00 AM

I like the positive outlook you convey, Sara. Though it is hard to enjoy when it floods causing destruction--in the long term rain is much needed. And yes--there will be blooms soon and it will be all worthwhile.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/12/2024 7:03:00 AM

Thank you, Vijay for dropping by and taking time to read and comment. Your comments are uplifting and encouraging. Sara K