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Dull grey clouds I'll get drenched pitter patter rain Bright rainbow arcs the sky soon we'll see the sun Light up the Page Poetry Contest Sponsored by Joseph May 3/3/19

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Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 3/10/2019 10:19:00 PM

A sincere congratulations on your win in Joseph's "Lanterne" contest, Jan - blessings and best wishes, and keep that ink flowing, my friend! :-) <3

Jan Allison
Date: 3/11/2019 12:46:00 PM

thanks Greg:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 3/10/2019 8:35:00 PM

Congratulations, Jan. Hugs Eve ~`*

Jan Allison
Date: 3/11/2019 12:46:00 PM

thanks Eve:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/9/2019 8:31:00 AM

- Congratulations on your winning poem: Rain and Sun, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 3/10/2019 6:32:00 PM

Thanks Anne-Lise:-) hugs Jan xx

CayCay Jennings

Date: 3/4/2019 8:33:00 PM

I'm back, not necessarily more matured but I'm quite good at faking it, and I am fully prepared to do so. I don't know the contest requirements, but know the ending sweetly and immediately brightened me up! You've written another and I'm off to read it. Sure enjoyed this one. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Jan Allison
Date: 3/10/2019 6:31:00 PM

Thanks CayCay:-) hugs Jan xx

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/3/2019 10:16:00 PM

A tribute to God's promise, Jan. Superb!

Jan Allison
Date: 3/10/2019 6:31:00 PM

thanks Caren:-) hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso

Date: 3/3/2019 9:24:00 PM

We still buried in snow! Nice poem!

Jan Allison
Date: 3/10/2019 6:30:00 PM

Stay warm my friend:-) hugs Jan xx

James Marshall Goff

Date: 3/3/2019 9:22:00 PM

Beautiful Jan! below zero here, we get SUPER bright sun-dogs in the southern sky on such days! Full spectrum!

Jan Allison
Date: 3/10/2019 6:30:00 PM

Thanks James:-) hugs Jan xx

Line Gauthier

Date: 3/3/2019 9:02:00 PM

Charming, Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 3/4/2019 3:10:00 AM

thanks Line:-) hugs Jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/3/2019 6:50:00 PM

The hope from a rainbow is such a blessing when seen in the skies Jan. It is like a love letter from God! Thank you for this inspiring beauty I know will do well in the contest. xxoo : )

Jan Allison
Date: 3/4/2019 3:10:00 AM

oh what a glorious description Connie I hope you use love letter from God in a poem:-) hugs Jan xx

Bette Bavington

Date: 3/3/2019 3:38:00 PM

Nice lantern. I love the rain and the rainbows. It shows us the riches of the colors as some are brighter than others. A good one. I wish you luck in the contest.

Jan Allison
Date: 3/3/2019 3:42:00 PM

what a beautiful comment Bette:-) hugs Jan xx

Rico Leffanta

Date: 3/3/2019 2:12:00 PM

Many, many rainbows in Hawai'i to brighten one's day, yet I have never heard anyone complain there were too many! Good luck in the contest (well done off the top of your head)! Aloha! Rico

Jan Allison
Date: 3/3/2019 2:15:00 PM

thanks Rico:-) hugs Jan xx

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 3/3/2019 1:04:00 PM

Good luck in this contest Jan, love that the rainbow comes out after grey skies and the pitter patter of rain. The only sad thing about a rainbow is that it dissipates so quickly. Beautiful poem. Poetry hugs, Jennifer.

Jan Allison
Date: 3/3/2019 1:06:00 PM

I love seeing a rainbow Jennifer they always make me smile:-) hugs Jan xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/3/2019 12:06:00 PM

No rainbows today looks like Freya's here trees bending, Good luck Jan. Tom.

Jan Allison
Date: 3/3/2019 12:14:00 PM

about 2 hours ago it went perfectly still and so quiet I suspect its the calm before the storm as i can now hear the wind getting up:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/3/2019 8:40:00 AM

- Lovely with your sunshine, Jan :) - ... best wishes in the contest - (Here we have had a lot of thick fog ... yesterday wet snow :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 3/3/2019 11:37:00 AM

thanks Anne-Lise you always bring sunshine to soup, we have a storm approaching gale force 9 I think we are in for a rough night:-( we had fog a couple of days back - I prefer that to severe galeforce weather!:-) hugs Jan xx

Joanna Daniel

Date: 3/3/2019 8:11:00 AM

Lovely lanterne, Jan:)

Jan Allison
Date: 3/3/2019 8:16:00 AM

thanks Jo, I wrote one yesterday and started this one which i prefer for the contest:-) hugs jan xx