Rain and a Drought Affected

A drop tickled his head; he ran like a rabbit;
Showed each one; they rubbed off as it's his habit;
He collected his pitchers and pots and stood out,
Morning went; noon went; evening too; same drought, O, drought!

It's one drop on his head next day; other on cheek;
In aromatic breeze there's unique streak and squeak; 
Pitchers and pots doubled; Clouds seemed to roam in doubt, 
Morning went; noon went; evening too; same drought, O, drought!

Third day went; the fourth and fifth flew away as well;
Drops many fell on him; who could he freely tell?
Monsoon, for them, is like surprise wedding dine-out,
Morning went; noon went; evening too; same drought, O, drought!

Lo, like a dam broken, rain torrents poured at last, 
Was it owing to his prayer, penance and fast?
None thought of any umbrella; they can leak rout, 
Morning went; noon went; evening too; where are you, drought…?


10 November 2022
Inspiring Rainy Days Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Sotto Poet
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Deschler Avatar
November 29, 2022 at 10:27 AM
An interesting and inspiring write with great rhythm and rhyme throughout... Congratulations on your placement with this great poem!
Canerdy Avatar
November 18, 2022 at 7:56 AM
Christuraj, your vividly descriptive poem expresses how relieved we are to have rain after a long dry spell! CONGRATS on your win. Janice
Andresen Avatar
November 13, 2022 at 11:18 AM
- We always worry about the weather - I would happily share some rain with those who need it... in Norway we have far too much rain... spring, summer, autumn and winter - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) -
Roper Avatar
November 12, 2022 at 11:30 PM
Congratulation on your win with this great imagery and lots of heavy worry feelings. Many blessing my friend
Alex Avatar
November 13, 2022 at 4:29 AM
Thank you very much.
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