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Rain Again

Water’s wet, the yard’s not yet, but I’ll bet the sprinkler’s set. Right as rain, here goes again, clouds containing deluge drains. Car’s just clean, and man, I mean they prance, preen, and soak the scene. Wonder why weathermen weep?
---------- A short little form called the 'Alliterisen' - lots of variations, but the rhyme pattern is aabbccd, and this one has 2 alliterations per line and internal rhymes on a fixed length of 7 syllables. Frankly, I'm not sure what I think about the 7th line after 3 couplets, but, whatever! https://poetscollective.org/poetryforms/alliterisen/

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Date: 10/14/2022 6:47:00 AM
Wow, again!!!
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