Rain

Rain is falling on waves, worrying fish is soaking wet
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Gauthier Avatar
January 2, 2018 at 2:57 PM
Congrats on your win Felicia.
Roper Avatar
December 28, 2017 at 10:15 AM
Great verse, Felicia, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve~`*
Gupta Avatar
December 28, 2017 at 5:54 AM
Really enjoyed ... Congratulations ...
Callus Avatar
December 27, 2017 at 8:02 AM
Congratulations on this fine win, Felicia! Thinking about it, in life we often worry about unimportant things! Regards // paul
Jarvis Avatar
December 27, 2017 at 9:15 AM
Thank you, Paul. You are very right. I was thinking about parents worrying too much about their children. I have a teenage boy.
Inman Avatar
December 27, 2017 at 6:50 AM
Really like your write Felicia, clever with a deep meaning.
Jarvis Avatar
December 27, 2017 at 9:12 AM
Thank you, James.
Dietrich Avatar
December 26, 2017 at 9:47 PM
Congrats for your win, Felicia.
Jarvis Avatar
December 27, 2017 at 1:25 AM
Thank you.
Andresen Avatar
December 26, 2017 at 2:26 PM
- Great written, Felicia - Much said a few words - Congratulations! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Jarvis Avatar
December 27, 2017 at 1:26 AM
Thank you.
One Avatar
December 26, 2017 at 2:25 PM
Deep one liner.. Congratulations on your placement in the Monoku 1 contest Felicia..
Jarvis Avatar
December 27, 2017 at 1:26 AM
Thank you.
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