Rain

The pain in me is shallow deep, 
i’ve lost all taste but bitter sweet,
and no one seems to notice how It feels, 
when your world comes crashing down on you.
I’ll try I have no choice, 
for better is he who tried and failed, 
than do naught but assume.
My heart is broken into pieces, 
I’m more dead than alive as it is, 
the clouds inside of me are full of tears, 
and when it rains , it’s like no one cares.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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