Rain

There it comes from
Looking handsome
The condensed pain
Poems of lovely rain
At the window pane
In the flower garden
Deep into the brain
A moist green smell
Sense of feeling well
Touch of love so nice
Some cucumber slice
Cloud after big cloud
Lightening very loud
Falls in romance drop
Plip – plop-plip- plop
In the water of strife
The canvas of our life
Gossip with tree leaf
Grows a green belief
Red blue yellow pink
Florid times to think
How nice from train
Looks the falling rain
Round wet soft view
In the glass it is you
More than we need
Rains as peace bead
To our starving vein
Welcome sweet rain
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August 13, 2016
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Krampe Avatar
August 17, 2016 at 7:21 PM
Lovely poem, I can almost hear the raindrops dripping.
Gupta Avatar
August 18, 2016 at 7:00 AM
Thank you ...
Gupta Avatar
August 16, 2016 at 6:42 AM
Thank you ... Yours much smaller, as I feel, has been much better, and congrats for your top win too ...
Nusker Avatar
August 16, 2016 at 12:02 AM
It's like a portrait of rain in a well framed picture plate. Enjoyed reading it. Congrats on your win.
Gupta Avatar
August 16, 2016 at 6:47 AM
The above comment intended for this reply got inadvertently inserted in the comments column ... ha ha ... sorry ... your poem conveys something even beyond your words ...
Haight Avatar
August 15, 2016 at 10:00 PM
Lovely imagery and rhyme in your cascade of 'raining' words, Probir. Congratulations on your win in the contest. Sandra
Gupta Avatar
August 15, 2016 at 10:46 PM
Thanks ... Congrats on your win for your 'Pain of Rain' too ..
Medders Tobechi Avatar
August 15, 2016 at 7:45 PM
Congratulations on your win. I like the meter, rhythm of the poem. It is fast.
Gupta Avatar
August 15, 2016 at 10:50 PM
Thank you Janis ...
Roper Avatar
August 15, 2016 at 6:16 PM
Congratulations on your win, Probir ! Hug Eve
Gupta Avatar
August 15, 2016 at 10:51 PM
Thank you so much Eve ...
Scars Avatar
August 15, 2016 at 5:06 PM
Probir, congrats on your placement in the Rain contest :)-luloo
Gupta Avatar
August 15, 2016 at 10:54 PM
Thank you ...
Deb Avatar
August 14, 2016 at 12:18 PM
A spicy note of rain ...lovely poem.
Gupta Avatar
August 14, 2016 at 10:02 PM
As the reader likes to view ... thank you ...
Dietrich Avatar
August 14, 2016 at 10:09 AM
Very nice and it looks like a sheet of rain falling down , the lines are so perfectly arranged!
Gupta Avatar
August 14, 2016 at 10:58 AM
Thank you ...
Y. Avatar
August 14, 2016 at 9:48 AM
Hi Probir, I enjoyed your take on the contest theme. You painted a lovely picture with your words. I really liked the scene. The rain looks beautiful! I wish you the best of luck in the contest. A Big seven:-) Alexis
Gupta Avatar
August 14, 2016 at 10:58 AM
Thank you ...
Motaung Avatar
August 13, 2016 at 11:00 PM
To the great rhymes thereto i add a seven!thanks
Gupta Avatar
August 14, 2016 at 2:00 AM
And I embrace the unexpected 'seven' with thanks ...
Trifiatis Avatar
August 13, 2016 at 8:14 AM
I think is the rain season over there dear, Probir! Your verses dance as the rain and so beautiful dance it is that delights the heart and mind! A seven!
Gupta Avatar
August 13, 2016 at 11:08 AM
Thanks Demetrios ... Rains are still on ... Monsoon from Bay of Bengal is quite strong ...
Turner Avatar
August 13, 2016 at 8:01 AM
I love colorful descriptions in poems. You have used many colors in this imagery filled write. Good luck Probir!
Gupta Avatar
August 13, 2016 at 5:34 AM
Thank you ...
Onclaud Avatar
August 13, 2016 at 4:38 AM
how vivid!... the flow is like rain cascading, probir..huggs
Gupta Avatar
August 13, 2016 at 5:38 AM
Thank you ... My first 'thank you' to you has gone above as my comment ... ha ha ... Most likely subterranean slip ... May Sigmund Freud live for ever ...
Garcia Avatar
August 13, 2016 at 4:27 AM
That's a thrilling write. I loved it. Crisp and clean to the ear. Very concise. It would have taken me 400 pages to say all you just did.
Gupta Avatar
August 13, 2016 at 5:40 AM
Thank you ...
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