Rain 7

It is raining now The farmer is sowing seeds Green greed leaps in eyes ______________________________________ Kolkata 27/5/20160

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/28/2016 8:50:00 AM

a very clever last line, Probir

Probir Gupta
Date: 5/28/2016 11:01:00 AM

The credit goes to the reader !

Paul Callus

Date: 5/28/2016 8:07:00 AM

Rain is heaven sent...a blessing and a fount of joy to any farmer (as long as it does not turn into a deluge!). Regards, Probir....paul

Probir Gupta
Date: 5/28/2016 11:03:00 AM

Very true...thanks and regards...

Lenny Gazbowski

Date: 5/27/2016 8:19:00 PM

I like this ! Nicely penned Probir.

Probir Gupta
Date: 5/27/2016 9:31:00 PM

Bubbles of matching wave length.....Thank you....