Rain 7

It is raining now
The farmer is sowing seeds
Green greed leaps in eyes
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Kolkata 27/5/20160
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Dietrich Avatar
May 28, 2016 at 8:50 AM
a very clever last line, Probir
Gupta Avatar
May 28, 2016 at 11:01 AM
The credit goes to the reader !
Callus Avatar
May 28, 2016 at 8:07 AM
Rain is heaven sent...a blessing and a fount of joy to any farmer (as long as it does not turn into a deluge!). Regards, Probir....paul
Gupta Avatar
May 28, 2016 at 11:03 AM
Very true...thanks and regards...
Gazbowski Avatar
May 27, 2016 at 8:19 PM
I like this ! Nicely penned Probir.
Gupta Avatar
May 27, 2016 at 9:31 PM
Bubbles of matching wave length.....Thank you....
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