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Robert Stoner Jr

Rain

falling rain rhythms
in perfect harmony
dream embraced


Robert Gene Stoner Jr ©
3/30/16

Copyright © Robert Stoner Jr | Year Posted 2016

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Andrea Dietrich

April 7, 2016 at 8:37 PM

Robert. This is very good and I looked down and saw no congrats. So then I counted the syllables and I think I know what happened. You went over 13 syllables!! Anyway, it is still a cool KU.

Robert Stoner Jr

April 8, 2016 at 12:57 PM

Thanks for the read and praise Andrea, appreciated as always. According to "How Many Syllables" this piece is indeed 13 syllables.

Connie Marcum Wong

April 2, 2016 at 11:32 PM

I adore the rain and the soothing sounds it brings. Lovely Robert! ; )

Robert Stoner Jr

April 3, 2016 at 3:34 PM

Thank you Connie for the read and words of support on this rainy day poem. Hope all's well always good to see you in the listings.

March 30, 2016 at 4:10 PM

Oh, nice, Robert. I love those nights as the raindrops thrum a gentle sleepy goodnight, sweet dreams.

Robert Stoner Jr

March 30, 2016 at 4:12 PM

Thanks John for the read and support on this piece. You found the heart of this theme.

March 30, 2016 at 3:55 PM

beautiful haiku Robert good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Robert Stoner Jr

March 30, 2016 at 4:02 PM

Thanks Jan , read your tear filled offering for the contest, good luck as well. Very heartfelt emotion in verse.

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