Rain

falling rain rhythms in perfect harmony dream embraced Robert Gene Stoner Jr © 3/30/16

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/7/2016 8:37:00 PM

Robert. This is very good and I looked down and saw no congrats. So then I counted the syllables and I think I know what happened. You went over 13 syllables!! Anyway, it is still a cool KU.

Robert Stoner Jr
Date: 4/8/2016 12:57:00 PM

Thanks for the read and praise Andrea, appreciated as always. According to "How Many Syllables" this piece is indeed 13 syllables.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/2/2016 11:32:00 PM

I adore the rain and the soothing sounds it brings. Lovely Robert! ; )

Robert Stoner Jr
Date: 4/3/2016 3:34:00 PM

Thank you Connie for the read and words of support on this rainy day poem. Hope all's well always good to see you in the listings.

John Lawless

Date: 3/30/2016 4:10:00 PM

Oh, nice, Robert. I love those nights as the raindrops thrum a gentle sleepy goodnight, sweet dreams.

Robert Stoner Jr
Date: 3/30/2016 4:12:00 PM

Thanks John for the read and support on this piece. You found the heart of this theme.

Jan Allison

Date: 3/30/2016 3:55:00 PM

beautiful haiku Robert good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Robert Stoner Jr
Date: 3/30/2016 4:02:00 PM

Thanks Jan , read your tear filled offering for the contest, good luck as well. Very heartfelt emotion in verse.