Rain

As the drips drop upon my  head
I get the feeling that my soul is being fed
drenching me in the rain from up above 
a reminder being sent down of God's constant love

I dance in the rain to keep my peace
the freedom gives me a feeling of such great release
the waters so refreshing to me
it opens up a whole new world to see
 
Continue to send a refreshing rains flow
I'll dance around in it wherever I may go
cause rain is water that replenishes the earth
And helps to keep us clean for what it's worth.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Shahein Avatar
January 8, 2016 at 8:14 PM
Congratulations on ur win with this remarkable poem , hugs / / :) dalia
Mason Gibbs Avatar
January 15, 2016 at 7:17 PM
Thanks
Lindley Avatar
December 24, 2015 at 7:51 PM
Congrats on your win!!
Mason Gibbs Avatar
December 27, 2015 at 11:27 PM
Thank you
A  Avatar
December 24, 2015 at 2:15 AM
GWEN, Congratulations on your wonderful Rain win. Have yourself a Blessed Christmas and Happy New Years. Smiles & Joy **SKAT**
Mason Gibbs Avatar
December 27, 2015 at 11:29 PM
Thanks, hope you had a blessed Christmas and have a happy and blessed new year.
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