Rain

Retrograde- Sky Demon-
As the liquor protrudes fresh
In my capsule cabriolet
Near the mildew of my flesh.

depressionimageintrospectionlonelymeaningfulacrostic

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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

December 11, 2015 at 9:50 AM

Congratulations H.E.

Skat A

December 10, 2015 at 1:18 PM

H.E., Congratulations with your wonderful win! *SKAT*

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

December 9, 2015 at 10:45 PM

Very wonderful write H.E.. congrats on great win!

Anne-Lise Andresen

November 17, 2015 at 12:15 PM

- Hey H.E. :) - A lovely time to start in an poetry club, autumn and winter is a time we spend a lot of time inside our homes - More time to read and write poetry - I wish you an enjoyable time and warm welcome :) -Thanks for your great first poem - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

November 16, 2015 at 11:25 PM

Hi H.E. Riddleton, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Pandita Sietesantos

November 16, 2015 at 9:25 AM

Hi H.E., this is such an excellent Acrostic - so much said in a few powerful words! I look forward to reading more of your work! Welcome to PoetrySoup and best wishes as you continue to churn out wonderful poetic pieces! Warmest regards and a score of 7! Pandita

H. E. Riddleton

November 16, 2015 at 7:58 PM

Thank you very much and thank you for such a welcome. I will look forward to reading your work too. :).

Skat A

November 16, 2015 at 12:05 AM

H.E. Riddleton Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

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