Rain

It was raining every where 
on woods and seas without care
countless tears were falling from sky
heart and earth both were dry
i heard the music of the rain 
its voice brought me a lot of pain
feeling thirsty i came out in rain
but all the droplets remained in vain
then your memories overcame my mind
my eyes became wet and tears shed
most of them remained outside 
some of them however fell inside 
drizzling on heart made it wet
my soul eversince feels at rest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2005

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November 11, 2009 at 2:07 PM
This is a wonderful poem. It is similar to mine. But yours has more depth. I really did like it
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