Rain

pitter-patter splash!
teardrops from the stormy clouds
falling down on me

Jan Allison
24th October 2014

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Darlene Gifford

Date: 11/8/2014 8:37:00 AM

Don't you just love the sound of rain when you are in bed, cozy and dry. The steading dripping of the rain helps me fall asleep. Lovely poem, Jan. Enjoyed it!

Jan Allison
Date: 11/8/2014 11:20:00 AM

Thanks Darlene :-) I don't mind the rain at night but prefer it not to rain during the day lol Hugs Jan xx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 10/26/2014 5:42:00 AM

lovely Jan.. :) just simply a feel of beautiful.. :) hugs and hugs.. :)

Jan Allison
Date: 10/26/2014 5:43:00 AM

Thanks so much Olive:-) hugs Jan xx

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 10/25/2014 1:17:00 PM

Marvelous Haiku it reminds me of rain but it went by lightning fast.

Jan Allison
Date: 10/25/2014 1:21:00 PM

LOl Thanks for the lovely comment Maurice:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/25/2014 6:36:00 AM

Very emotive work..I have had those clouds myself..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Jan Allison
Date: 10/25/2014 6:40:00 AM

Many thanks for dropping by Sara:-) Hugs Jan xx

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/24/2014 9:27:00 PM

This is great! I just love your terrific imagery you have supplied within this illustrious write my friend! What a brilliant poem! I really enjoyed reading this tremendous piece this evening! Great Work!!

Jan Allison
Date: 10/25/2014 1:49:00 AM

Thank you Russell you are always so generous with your praise:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 10/24/2014 8:29:00 PM

Thankfully we are not having to many pitter-patter patterns right now. Nice Haiku Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 10/25/2014 1:48:00 AM

thats great news Brenda i hope for sun when I am away next week:-) Hugs jan xx

Sebastian Aaron Baez

Date: 10/24/2014 7:13:00 PM

Awesome haiku Jan! I also enjoy watching rainstorms from the comfort of my home....just wearing socks. :)

Jan Allison
Date: 10/25/2014 1:47:00 AM

LOL thanks for the comment Sebastian:-) Hugs Jan xx

Sandra Haight

Date: 10/24/2014 7:02:00 PM

Hi Jan, such a creatively worded Haiku! It's been doing that here in New York for three days now! Sandra

Jan Allison
Date: 10/24/2014 7:03:00 PM

Thanks so much for the lovely comment Sandra:-) Hugs jan xxx

David Meade

Date: 10/24/2014 6:06:00 PM

I love running in the rain . . . the first few drops are a shock but soon I am soaked . . . a washing off of the old, being refreshed . . . then the wind picks up . . . OK, I getting cold now. Your words ignited many images within my head. Nicely done.

Jan Allison
Date: 10/24/2014 6:14:00 PM

Thanks so much David:-) Hugs jan xxx