Rain

pitter-patter splash!
teardrops from the stormy clouds
falling down on me

Jan Allison
24th October 2014

rainhaiku

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Darlene Gifford

November 8, 2014 at 8:37 AM

Don't you just love the sound of rain when you are in bed, cozy and dry. The steading dripping of the rain helps me fall asleep. Lovely poem, Jan. Enjoyed it!

Jan Allison

November 8, 2014 at 11:20 AM

Thanks Darlene :-) I don't mind the rain at night but prefer it not to rain during the day lol Hugs Jan xx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

October 26, 2014 at 5:42 AM

lovely Jan.. :) just simply a feel of beautiful.. :) hugs and hugs.. :)

Jan Allison

October 26, 2014 at 5:43 AM

Thanks so much Olive:-) hugs Jan xx

Maurice Yvonne

October 25, 2014 at 1:17 PM

Marvelous Haiku it reminds me of rain but it went by lightning fast.

Jan Allison

October 25, 2014 at 1:21 PM

LOl Thanks for the lovely comment Maurice:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Sara Kendrick

October 25, 2014 at 6:36 AM

Very emotive work..I have had those clouds myself..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Jan Allison

October 25, 2014 at 6:40 AM

Many thanks for dropping by Sara:-) Hugs Jan xx

Russell Sivey

October 24, 2014 at 9:27 PM

This is great! I just love your terrific imagery you have supplied within this illustrious write my friend! What a brilliant poem! I really enjoyed reading this tremendous piece this evening! Great Work!!

Jan Allison

October 25, 2014 at 1:49 AM

Thank you Russell you are always so generous with your praise:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Brenda Meier-Hans

October 24, 2014 at 8:29 PM

Thankfully we are not having to many pitter-patter patterns right now. Nice Haiku Jan.

Jan Allison

October 25, 2014 at 1:48 AM

thats great news Brenda i hope for sun when I am away next week:-) Hugs jan xx

Sebastian Aaron Baez

October 24, 2014 at 7:13 PM

Awesome haiku Jan! I also enjoy watching rainstorms from the comfort of my home....just wearing socks. :)

Jan Allison

October 25, 2014 at 1:47 AM

LOL thanks for the comment Sebastian:-) Hugs Jan xx

Sandra Haight

October 24, 2014 at 7:02 PM

Hi Jan, such a creatively worded Haiku! It's been doing that here in New York for three days now! Sandra

Jan Allison

October 24, 2014 at 7:03 PM

Thanks so much for the lovely comment Sandra:-) Hugs jan xxx

David Meade

October 24, 2014 at 6:06 PM

I love running in the rain . . . the first few drops are a shock but soon I am soaked . . . a washing off of the old, being refreshed . . . then the wind picks up . . . OK, I getting cold now. Your words ignited many images within my head. Nicely done.

Jan Allison

October 24, 2014 at 6:14 PM

Thanks so much David:-) Hugs jan xxx