Rain

Here the pitter patter of the rain
            going down the drain 
            making me want to go to sleep
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Davis Avatar
February 6, 2014 at 8:35 AM
Michael what a cute and creative write. But it would make me want to "tinkle" instead of sleep. LOL Thanks for the great comment on my Picnic Pleasures poem.
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January 9, 2014 at 2:42 PM
- Yes, do as the bear .... came forward to spring ... - Nice haiku, Michael!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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January 9, 2014 at 3:44 PM
Thanks Anne for your comments glad you liked it xoxo
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