Rain 3

raindrops are frequent
green bubbles grace our nature
cloud in umbrella
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23/5/2016, Kolkata
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Gazbowski Avatar
May 23, 2016 at 8:15 AM
Waterproofs required ! Nice haiku Probir
Gupta Avatar
May 23, 2016 at 7:57 PM
Waterproof? ..... Thank you.....
Dietrich Avatar
May 22, 2016 at 8:16 PM
Nice. I found the last line so intriguing.
Gupta Avatar
May 23, 2016 at 12:20 AM
Wow, bienvenida Andrea, y thank you for the surprise visit and comment...had you said which idea is intriguing, I could try to borrow some light from the rains and enlighten..
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