Rain

Render your reassuring sheets of waters Admonish my growth and tend to the slaughters Initiate refreshing drops, and lighten the load Nourish us all by washing out the blood

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Rebecca Larkin

Date: 7/10/2012 8:53:00 PM

I love rain and I love this poem. It's really great and elegant. :) -Becca

Richard Palmer

Date: 6/13/2012 7:05:00 PM

wash away all the bad,nice write Laura

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 6/11/2012 3:12:00 PM

Hi Laura, so glad I found you again and read this verse about the soothing rains that I love. I always feel cleansed after a good rain and I'm sure the green things do. A nice write!:)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/9/2012 1:51:00 PM

Interesting work..I am not sure exactly of the interpertation though...Enjoyed reading your Acrostic..Sara

Terry O'Leary

Date: 6/7/2012 6:32:00 PM

The deep stain needs a long rain... nice poem... Terry

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/7/2012 2:13:00 PM

deep poem, well written Laura. - oxox Anne-Lise