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Rain

Render your reassuring sheets of waters Admonish my growth and tend to the slaughters Initiate refreshing drops, and lighten the load Nourish us all by washing out the blood

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/10/2012 8:53:00 PM
I love rain and I love this poem. It's really great and elegant. :) -Becca
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Date: 6/13/2012 7:05:00 PM
wash away all the bad,nice write Laura
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Date: 6/11/2012 3:12:00 PM
Hi Laura, so glad I found you again and read this verse about the soothing rains that I love. I always feel cleansed after a good rain and I'm sure the green things do. A nice write!:)
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Date: 6/9/2012 1:51:00 PM
Interesting work..I am not sure exactly of the interpertation though...Enjoyed reading your Acrostic..Sara
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Date: 6/7/2012 6:32:00 PM
The deep stain needs a long rain... nice poem... Terry
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Date: 6/7/2012 2:13:00 PM
deep poem, well written Laura. - oxox Anne-Lise
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