Rain

Render your reassuring sheets of waters
Admonish my growth and tend to the slaughters
Initiate refreshing drops, and lighten the load
Nourish us all by washing out the blood
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Larkin Avatar
July 10, 2012 at 8:53 PM
I love rain and I love this poem. It's really great and elegant. :) -Becca
Palmer Avatar
June 13, 2012 at 7:05 PM
wash away all the bad,nice write Laura
Wesley Avatar
June 11, 2012 at 3:12 PM
Hi Laura, so glad I found you again and read this verse about the soothing rains that I love. I always feel cleansed after a good rain and I'm sure the green things do. A nice write!:)
Kendrick Avatar
June 9, 2012 at 1:51 PM
Interesting work..I am not sure exactly of the interpertation though...Enjoyed reading your Acrostic..Sara
O'Leary Avatar
June 7, 2012 at 6:32 PM
The deep stain needs a long rain... nice poem... Terry
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June 7, 2012 at 2:13 PM
deep poem, well written Laura. - oxox Anne-Lise
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