Rain

In times of dispair.
          through days of rain.

     His spirit calls me,
          in my constrain.

     Forever guiding,
          his words are fate.

     My pathway eternal,
          through heavens gate.

     I chose to love him,
          then followed through.

     His love is everlasting,
          so faithful and true.

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Date: 7/13/2012 4:28:00 AM
nice write ;}
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Date: 4/26/2012 11:38:00 PM
hi... How are you...""" thought I'd seen you here last month... just dropping by a hi...always..pd
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Date: 1/10/2012 8:57:00 PM
Hello,John... I'm smiling at your comment.. I wish the poet inside of me would surface.. i don't know why i have writers block... the poem i wrote last night was over a game.. of grab bag... " you know them candies ""sweethearts"" the ones that say all kinds of lovey dovey valentine words. Well we had to write a poem, over what the candy read. Well it was a cute challenge. So! yes, i wrote that poem " very quick, glad you enjoyed. As i do your persona.. Have a good night,..p.d.
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Date: 1/2/2012 9:14:00 AM
Don't we need that place of peace and safety when it rains in our lives. As you say,we have the right to chose!
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Date: 12/26/2011 2:57:00 PM
Your Poetry comes from a peaceful place inside a true Poets soul... Glad I stoped by and I am sure to return...Michael
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Date: 12/20/2011 5:13:00 AM
Great spirited rhyming in this poem, Aaron. It seems to have touched many. I love the image of the gate. Robert Frost wrote a short piece that reminds me of this"Home is the place where, when you have to go there, They have to take you in." ha ha. He had humor in this line but I believe their was a dribbling of God mixed in it too. Have a great day today..even better than yesterday! Gwendolen
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Date: 12/19/2011 9:01:00 PM
you are a great follower of belief...and reading ur wrks makes me feel gr8....god bless ya
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Date: 12/17/2011 9:57:00 AM
another great pen John thank you for sharing your beautiful verse!
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Date: 12/10/2011 5:44:00 PM
running smooth
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Date: 12/9/2011 7:09:00 AM
I always enjoy your poems.
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Date: 12/8/2011 1:43:00 PM
such a nice piece of writing you have here. Keep it up cory
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Date: 12/7/2011 6:54:00 PM
I need to read these lovely words you write. The last 2 lines give me such a sweet lift which I needed today John.
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John Aaron Green
Date: 12/7/2011 8:32:00 PM
i have to admit i find myself needing poetry more everyday,,lol.....
Date: 12/7/2011 6:01:00 PM
Lovely spiritual poem, john. Glad you chose the right!
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John Aaron Green
Date: 12/7/2011 8:31:00 PM
thanks you andrea,,,you are so sweet....
Date: 12/7/2011 4:18:00 PM
Very nice! And true as true can be. :-)
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John Aaron Green
Date: 12/7/2011 8:30:00 PM
thanks dan,,,im glad i met you,,your poetry is wonderful...
Date: 12/7/2011 1:06:00 PM
* "I LOVE THIS SOFT SWEET SONG * MY DEAR LOVELY PRECIOUS JOHN * YOUR EVERLASTING HEART HAS SUCH A WONDERFUL GENTLENESS TO TOUCH * I CAN RARELY CONSIDER ANYTHING MORE BEAUTIFUL THAN THIS SPECIAL QUALITY * BEAUTIFUL POEM & THANK YOU * YOUR PRICELESS VISIT & COMMENT MADE MYSELF SMILE JOYFULLY * MY LUV TO YOU ALWAYS * SARAH." *
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John Aaron Green
Date: 12/7/2011 1:20:00 PM
you always know just tha right things to say,,,,i am humbled by your comments,,,,as always..
Date: 12/7/2011 11:04:00 AM
Wow, John... I send some soup mail... ThroughAnd mentioned following faith... This poem has a moment one can breathe with each line... At this moment I can live my life and follow the things I know... Everlasting sounds good about now... I hear I feel, I live... And choose to follow through rain or not... Have a God, bless day..pd
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Poet Destroyer A
Date: 12/7/2011 11:05:00 AM
Rain and doubt... I mean...
Date: 12/7/2011 10:35:00 AM
ur poems have some eternal connections...I missed reading ur poems all these days ...
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John Aaron Green
Date: 12/7/2011 1:17:00 PM
thank you,,,,you are a precious friend,,,,
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