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Under the cold rain We walk closer and closer Shooting obstacles

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/5/2016 12:48:00 AM
excellent
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Date: 5/3/2011 12:23:00 PM
lovely write Desiree, take care,enjoyed,,..p.d.
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Date: 5/1/2011 7:36:00 AM
Cool and deep Desiree ..picturing two under an umbrella for one shooting obstacles.. clever piece luv.. creative and enjoyable too..luv..
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Date: 4/27/2011 11:57:00 AM
It's the special bond you feel with a mate that helps you weather these obstacles that creep into our lives, Desire. Well described emotions! Best wishes, Carolyn
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