Rain

Under the cold rain
We walk closer and closer
Shooting obstacles
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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January 5, 2016 at 12:48 AM
excellent
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May 3, 2011 at 12:23 PM
lovely write Desiree, take care,enjoyed,,..p.d.
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May 1, 2011 at 7:36 AM
Cool and deep Desiree ..picturing two under an umbrella for one shooting obstacles.. clever piece luv.. creative and enjoyable too..luv..
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April 27, 2011 at 11:57 AM
It's the special bond you feel with a mate that helps you weather these obstacles that creep into our lives, Desire. Well described emotions! Best wishes, Carolyn
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