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Rain

~~~~The rain just inspired me to write this, not the best, but it is something.~~~~ Silent rain hits the ground. While the gutters make all the sound. The smog covers up my window. Drip, Drop, Plop, Plop, The silent rain hits the ground.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/2/2010 8:52:00 PM
welcome to da soup!
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Date: 8/30/2010 4:23:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Elizabeth. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/29/2010 8:56:00 PM
That makes three who love the rain, Elizabeth! Welcome to PS! Peace, Audrey
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Date: 8/29/2010 2:50:00 PM
Welcome to the soup. I really enjoyed reading your poem.
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Date: 8/29/2010 1:06:00 PM
I too love the rain! Light & Love welcome to the Soup!
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Date: 8/29/2010 12:58:00 PM
Nice, keep it up!------Ell
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