Rain

~~~~The rain just inspired me to write this, not the best, but it is something.~~~~ 


Silent rain hits the ground.

While the gutters make all the sound.

The smog covers up my window.

Drip, Drop, Plop, Plop,

The silent rain hits the ground.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Davis Avatar
September 2, 2010 at 8:52 PM
welcome to da soup!
Brown Avatar
August 30, 2010 at 4:23 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Elizabeth. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
Haick Avatar
August 29, 2010 at 8:56 PM
That makes three who love the rain, Elizabeth! Welcome to PS! Peace, Audrey
Hall Mad Poet Avatar
August 29, 2010 at 2:50 PM
Welcome to the soup. I really enjoyed reading your poem.
Guzzi Avatar
August 29, 2010 at 1:06 PM
I too love the rain! Light & Love welcome to the Soup!
Bourner Avatar
August 29, 2010 at 12:58 PM
Nice, keep it up!------Ell
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