Francine Roberts Poet Haiku

Rain

Slumber induced by

    Falling rain outside window.

       Insomnia gone.







 for the contest "Rain"
I have always had a problem with insomnia, but when it rains at night the sound always lulls 
me to sleep, whether a gentle rain or all out storm,

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Debbie Guzzi May 23, 2010 at 10:31 AM Nice turn in the last line! Light & love

Daniel Cwiak May 19, 2010 at 10:35 AM Enjoyed this one very much. Falling water can have such a quieting effect on the nervous system. Good luck in the contest! Regards, Dan C

Carolyn Devonshire May 19, 2010 at 6:01 AM Unique, creative approach to the contest, Francine. Wishing you success! (I have trouble sleeping, too, and rain does seem to help.) Love, Carolyn

Poet Destroyer A May 18, 2010 at 11:13 PM well done and enjoyed,..p.d.