Rain

The rain falling down
On the roof above my bed
Brings 'sound' sleep indeed
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Kendrick Avatar
October 14, 2009 at 1:11 PM
Nicely done Haiku. Must be a metal roof. Keep writing. Sara
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October 14, 2009 at 12:31 PM
Yes it can. You have me smiling with your words. Thank you for sharing your poem with us. Keep on writing! Karen
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October 14, 2009 at 11:00 AM
I have enjoyed reading your poetry today LD. Thank you for sharing it with us. Love, Carol
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October 13, 2009 at 7:29 PM
It's going to rain here tonight. I hope I hear it on the roof...Nice Haiku..I enjoyed reading it...Marty
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