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Rain

The rustling sound of the leaves 
The falling drizzle touching my face 
The clouds talking in rumbles 
Wonder why they are in such a haste

The pitter patter of the rain 
Embracing me in its haze 
The misty fog enclosing me 
Maybe I am in a maze 

Overwhelmed I fell on the ground 
Eyes stinging, my heart in pain
The cold shower liberating me 
The sky crying with me through the rain 

Couldn't tell if it's been a second or an hour 
Didn't know if I had driven too far
Fleeting memories all tinged sour 
The only comfort was the petrichor 

The clouds scattered, the rays shined 
The dark unveiled a golden fine line 
The birds chirping, the rainbow in sight 
Maybe it's just a matter of time...


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Date: 9/26/2024 11:15:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Asmi Sharma
Date: 2/21/2025 11:58:00 AM
Thank you so much for your kinds words, I really appreciate it for God knows I truly needed to hear this, You honestly made my day. Warm wishes~
Date: 7/28/2024 1:52:00 PM
Asmi you wrote this one really well.. great selection of words and imagery in this one..
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Asmi Sharma
Date: 2/21/2025 12:00:00 PM
Thank you so much for your kind words and appreciation, I am glad you liked it. Warm wishes~

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