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Rain

The rain makes me insane when it hits my window pain my face makes a frown when the sun comes around my brothers aren't here "where are you"? i can not see. i thought that my race was free to believe why aren't we free why aren't you here why do i frown when the sun comes around as the rain starts to stop my pain starts to drop my frown starts to smile then my sun come around our pain is over now were free!!! my race can see new times and believe.....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/30/2009 11:21:00 PM
RAW- str8 realness...
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Date: 4/11/2009 4:56:00 AM
Nice poem filled with slightly disguised hiddden meaning, nice job
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