Rain

City rain 
Has a sound of its own 
Not loud, not soft 
Yet you 
Can sense it 
Even when the windows are closed 
A quick pitter patter 
Bouncing from the sidewalks 
Into 
The streets. 

When it rains 
A lethargic grayness 
Hovers overhead 
People rush for cover 
Anxious not to get wet 
A thousand accents 
Pierce the skies 
Umbrellas! One dollar! 
One dollar! Umbrellas! 
At night 
The City 
Crawls to a standstill 
Empty reflections 
At every traffic light. 

The young walk in the rain 
Fist clenched 
In deep pockets 
The brave accept 
What falls from heaven 
And the old 
Patiently watch 
The rain 
Wash away 
The sins of the City.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Marcum Wong Avatar
April 14, 2012 at 12:19 AM
Edmund, I loved the journey this well written poem took me on. Congratulations on it being featured. Aloha, Connie
Roske Avatar
April 13, 2012 at 10:16 AM
beautiful imagery - congratulations on your feature.
Ditshwele Avatar
April 13, 2012 at 2:49 AM
a lovely rain poem Edmund. I enjoyed reading
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