Patri Venkata Ramana Poet Verse

Rain

RAIN
                                                     shower
                                                   outpouring 

                                          chills soil from heat wave
                                          sprouting, symbol of life
                                           the peasants exhilarate

                                    “heaven’s elixir sprayed on earth.”

                                          
                                        Pyramids Poetry Contest 
                                        Sponsored by: Joseph May
                                        Date: 08/09/2020

                                         Placed : 3rd

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Joseph May September 20, 2020 at 2:48 PM Very nicely done Patri, Congrats on your win.. Patri Venkata Ramana September 25, 2020 at 9:32 PM Thanks a lot for the compliments.

Andrea Dietrich September 20, 2020 at 2:01 PM Very poetic little pyramid, Patri. Congrats. Patri Venkata Ramana September 25, 2020 at 9:32 PM Thanks a lot and glad for the compliments

Anne-Lise Andresen September 20, 2020 at 11:53 AM - Last line says it all, Patri :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Patri Venkata Ramana September 25, 2020 at 9:31 PM Thanks a lot for the compliments.

Jeanne Mcgee September 20, 2020 at 11:23 AM I really enjoyed the picture you penned...congrats on your placement. Patri Venkata Ramana September 25, 2020 at 9:30 PM Thanks a lot and very glad.

Caren Krutsinger September 8, 2020 at 9:28 AM The peasants would no doubt love it that they "exhiliarted" - I liked it too! Patri Venkata Ramana September 9, 2020 at 6:52 AM Thank you very much for the compliments and encouragement.