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RAIN shower outpouring chills soil from heat wave sprouting, symbol of life the peasants exhilarate “heaven’s elixir sprayed on earth.” Pyramids Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Joseph May Date: 08/09/2020 Placed : 3rd

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Date: 9/20/2020 2:48:00 PM
Very nicely done Patri, Congrats on your win..
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Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 9/25/2020 9:32:00 PM
Thanks a lot for the compliments.
Date: 9/20/2020 2:01:00 PM
Very poetic little pyramid, Patri. Congrats.
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Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 9/25/2020 9:32:00 PM
Thanks a lot and glad for the compliments
Date: 9/20/2020 11:53:00 AM
- Last line says it all, Patri :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 9/25/2020 9:31:00 PM
Thanks a lot for the compliments.
Date: 9/20/2020 11:23:00 AM
I really enjoyed the picture you penned...congrats on your placement.
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Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 9/25/2020 9:30:00 PM
Thanks a lot and very glad.
Date: 9/8/2020 9:28:00 AM
The peasants would no doubt love it that they "exhiliarted" - I liked it too!
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Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 9/9/2020 6:52:00 AM
Thank you very much for the compliments and encouragement.

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