Rain

let the rain dance home.
let the rain sing upon your face with blue drops.
let the rain soak your lawn.
the rain fills pools to the top.
the rain goes through the pipes and rivers.
the rain plays the flute before bed.
           freedom is rain
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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May 13, 2016 at 10:36 PM
xaniver dickey, Fantastic writing, glad to read your poem tonight. Forever ~LINDA~
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May 12, 2016 at 10:09 AM
xaniver dickey, creative and well done. Thank you for sharing. **SKAT**
Brown Avatar
September 10, 2008 at 6:52 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup . Please keep writing and posting your poetry. I enjoyed reading your poem today and hope to read more soon. Love, Carol
Burton Avatar
August 31, 2008 at 10:05 AM
rain makes me tired on sundays, beautiful poem.
Winter Avatar
August 28, 2008 at 1:13 PM
Very beautiful. Love the second line especially. Welcome to PoetrySoup. Love, Shar
Spence Sr Avatar
August 27, 2008 at 11:30 PM
This is wonderful. I like your take on the rain. Great job~Joseph
Jordan Avatar
August 26, 2008 at 8:56 PM
The rain is the sustainer of all life - very well done - God Bless
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