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Rain

let the rain dance home. let the rain sing upon your face with blue drops. let the rain soak your lawn. the rain fills pools to the top. the rain goes through the pipes and rivers. the rain plays the flute before bed. freedom is rain

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 5/13/2016 10:36:00 PM
xaniver dickey, Fantastic writing, glad to read your poem tonight. Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 5/12/2016 10:09:00 AM
xaniver dickey, creative and well done. Thank you for sharing. **SKAT**
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Date: 9/10/2008 6:52:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup . Please keep writing and posting your poetry. I enjoyed reading your poem today and hope to read more soon. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/31/2008 10:05:00 AM
rain makes me tired on sundays, beautiful poem.
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Date: 8/28/2008 1:13:00 PM
Very beautiful. Love the second line especially. Welcome to PoetrySoup. Love, Shar
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Date: 8/27/2008 11:30:00 PM
This is wonderful. I like your take on the rain. Great job~Joseph
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Date: 8/26/2008 8:56:00 PM
The rain is the sustainer of all life - very well done - God Bless
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