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Rain


     sudden downpour falls
tiny raindrops dance on the street-
     sun peeks through a cloud

rainsunhaiku

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Heidi Sands

May 24, 2019 at 1:52 PM

Very nice :)

Jennifer Proxenos

May 24, 2019 at 9:28 AM

Perfect description of the sun after a storm when raindrops are still falling. In Africa we call this "A monkeys wedding". Very enjoyable write. Hugs, Jennifer.

CayCay Godwin

May 24, 2019 at 8:37 AM

I felt I was looking out a window at a familiar scene that more often than not would evoke rainy day dream-feelings. I enjoyed feeling that, enjoyed the haiku and wish you an ever peeking sun! All the best ... CayCay

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 24, 2019 at 5:15 AM

- A lovely haiku, Allen :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Besma Riabi Dziri

May 24, 2019 at 4:47 AM

The rain of your words reigning over your lovely Haiku paving the heart for the warmth and light of the sun! A genuine capture of one of Nature's wonders! A pleasure to read, Allen.. Best regards.

William Kelii Kekaula

May 23, 2019 at 7:39 PM

The little constants that's taken for granted allen, thank you, Aloha wk

Joseph May

May 23, 2019 at 12:52 PM

Sun not yet ready to surrender...Nicely written Allen...

Allen Beilschmidt Sr.

May 23, 2019 at 12:56 PM

Thank you Joseph

Pandita Sietesantos

May 23, 2019 at 12:41 PM

A well-written haiku with that stunning element of surprise at the end - like the masters meant haiku to be written! Excellent imagery! All the best. Pandita

Allen Beilschmidt Sr.

May 23, 2019 at 12:56 PM

Thank you Pandita