Rain

sudden downpour falls tiny raindrops dance on the street- sun peeks through a cloud

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Date: 5/24/2019 1:52:00 PM
Very nice :)
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Date: 5/24/2019 9:28:00 AM
Perfect description of the sun after a storm when raindrops are still falling. In Africa we call this "A monkeys wedding". Very enjoyable write. Hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 5/24/2019 8:37:00 AM
I felt I was looking out a window at a familiar scene that more often than not would evoke rainy day dream-feelings. I enjoyed feeling that, enjoyed the haiku and wish you an ever peeking sun! All the best ... CayCay
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Date: 5/24/2019 5:15:00 AM
- A lovely haiku, Allen :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/24/2019 4:47:00 AM
The rain of your words reigning over your lovely Haiku paving the heart for the warmth and light of the sun! A genuine capture of one of Nature's wonders! A pleasure to read, Allen.. Best regards.
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Date: 5/23/2019 7:39:00 PM
The little constants that's taken for granted allen, thank you, Aloha wk
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Date: 5/23/2019 12:52:00 PM
Sun not yet ready to surrender...Nicely written Allen...
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Allen Beilschmidt Sr.
Date: 5/23/2019 12:56:00 PM
Thank you Joseph
Date: 5/23/2019 12:41:00 PM
A well-written haiku with that stunning element of surprise at the end - like the masters meant haiku to be written! Excellent imagery! All the best. Pandita
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Allen Beilschmidt Sr.
Date: 5/23/2019 12:56:00 PM
Thank you Pandita
Date: 5/23/2019 12:02:00 PM
playful haiku.. i did one about rain too, allen... huggs
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Allen Beilschmidt Sr.
Date: 5/23/2019 12:10:00 PM
I'll look for yours nette.
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