Rain

in the blissful rain
baby bird is opening 
its mouth; clearing thirst.
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Date - 29/7/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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De Beaulieu Avatar
September 23, 2019 at 7:48 PM
Hello Augustus Black, I can just picture this bird with the mouth open. waiting for water. have a nice eevening my friend.
Dietrich Avatar
September 16, 2018 at 8:23 PM
so cute . I enjoyed this image.
Krutsinger Avatar
July 29, 2018 at 10:37 PM
A lovely haiku. Well done, Augustus.
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