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Image result for pictures of old railroad tracks needing repairThis poem is metaphorical..SK

railroad

railroad old, weathered, worn repair, replace, or leave sadness at loss or joy renewed God's choice
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 12, 2025 at 3:13 PM
We reclaimed our city's old train station...now it's the focal point of our town. I also appreciate the layering in your poem....in the last two lines, hugs, Sara B
Andresen Avatar
October 11, 2025 at 10:55 AM
- No, "the old" should not always be repaired, Sara - the choice of values, quality and consideration (of life) - hugs
Kendrick Avatar
October 11, 2025 at 1:45 PM
Yes, I agree, Anne-Lise. I think we should bring back to life that which is worn if at all possible. Thanks for your kind review. Sara K
Rolland Avatar
October 11, 2025 at 3:06 AM
great poem, so inspiring and true, bravo poet Sara
Kendrick Avatar
October 11, 2025 at 4:24 AM
Thank you, Yann. I appreciate the visit and nice comments. Sara K
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