Railroad

trains of thought
emblazoned with slashrune graffiti
children count the cars

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Kurt Ravidas

July 27, 2019 at 1:46 PM

Oh, my goodness, slashrune graffiti! That's how the exact word reveals the essence of the phenomenon. In this case, the phenomenon of moving train cars. Bravo, John. I appreciate such rarities. P.S.: I wonder who doesn't appreciate them)

Kurt Ravidas

August 3, 2019 at 9:05 AM

We do it everyday, John)

John Bertin

July 27, 2019 at 11:33 PM

Thank you very much. Runes of egoism...or just to say hello. I wish I could do that.