Lacy Dodd Poet Rhyme

Raging Storm

It rumbles as the storm begins 
 
Frustration strikes all with in
 
Raging wars on peaceful land
 
In the end there is no lending hand
 
For bonds are ripped and torn
 
The mender is completely worn
 
Sick from furious waves 
 
Full of overwhelming craze
 
The sea itself has been iced over
 
As unrealistic hopes dreadfully lower
 
The calm is so far into the distant
 
Its meaning becomes nonexistent
 
Misinterpreted loved ones 
 
Are mistaken as the burden
 
The obscure truth is masked in doubt
 
Heavily hanging in the air  
 
Such animosity, not a soul should ever bear

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Carl Fraser November 2, 2012 at 12:33 AM Really like your imagery here, of course i like storms, anyway very nice read, blessings, Carl Lacy Dodd January 17, 2013 at 7:53 PM Thank you! I love storms too, but not the type of family feuds

Courtney Courtney November 1, 2012 at 8:15 PM hoping that its over

Poet Destroyer A November 1, 2012 at 3:04 PM Lacy, wow... I'm glad this storm is not in my area... nice imagery very epic.....always~pd Lacy Dodd January 17, 2013 at 7:52 PM thanks! I wrote this poem because of a family feud. I really like how poems can have many meanings from one person to the next and how current events can make you see a poem as it was written for it. I wonder if I hadn't posted it right around the time of the storm if it would have had a different meaning to people. :) Anyway just food for thought! Thank you for the compliment! Courtney Courtney November 1, 2012 at 8:15 PM I have been out there on the island when it hits it's awfull