Raging Storm

It rumbles as the storm begins Frustration strikes all with in Raging wars on peaceful land In the end there is no lending hand For bonds are ripped and torn The mender is completely worn Sick from furious waves Full of overwhelming craze The sea itself has been iced over As unrealistic hopes dreadfully lower The calm is so far into the distant Its meaning becomes nonexistent Misinterpreted loved ones Are mistaken as the burden The obscure truth is masked in doubt Heavily hanging in the air Such animosity, not a soul should ever bear

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Carl Fraser

Date: 11/2/2012 12:33:00 AM

Really like your imagery here, of course i like storms, anyway very nice read, blessings, Carl

Lacy Dodd
Date: 1/17/2013 7:53:00 PM

Thank you! I love storms too, but not the type of family feuds

Courtney Courtney

Date: 11/1/2012 8:15:00 PM

hoping that its over

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/1/2012 3:04:00 PM

Lacy, wow... I'm glad this storm is not in my area... nice imagery very epic.....always~pd

Lacy Dodd
Date: 1/17/2013 7:52:00 PM

thanks! I wrote this poem because of a family feud. I really like how poems can have many meanings from one person to the next and how current events can make you see a poem as it was written for it. I wonder if I hadn't posted it right around the time of the storm if it would have had a different meaning to people. :) Anyway just food for thought! Thank you for the compliment!

Courtney Courtney
Date: 11/1/2012 8:15:00 PM

I have been out there on the island when it hits it's awfull