Rage

I'm on a road fit with rage Nothing- NO ONE can or will stop me This feeling... More powerful than ever I want to stay this way Cause harm to anyone who tries to stop me I'm shaking, racing, pacing The thoughts in my head- Murderous My skin- Cold to the touch The blood in my veins- Running like a waterfall The power- MY Strength Overbearing This madness- Others shall fear This pain- I will endure The "New Me" I WILL enjoy!

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/9/2010 11:35:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your poetry today Gabrille. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors always. Love, Carol

The Melody Sings

Date: 3/9/2010 5:26:00 AM

I like it! Haha!

Nicholas Hollingsworth

Date: 3/8/2010 7:34:00 PM

Absolutely chilling. In the best of ways. Rage is a drug, and sometimes we can be the addicts; never wanting to stop fitting and wreaking havoc for no discernable reason. Lovely. Lovely, lovely, lovely.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/8/2010 6:25:00 PM

Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets... please continue to share your creative writes with us all.. as this image filled poetry tonight..luv.. Linda-Marie.."Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup..

Phillip Sohn

Date: 3/8/2010 5:29:00 PM

Great imagery. Words with a lot of meaning. Please read my poems as well. I would love your input.

Jessica Arteaga

Date: 3/8/2010 12:58:00 PM

sometimes rage definitely gets the best of us...but sometimes it feels good especially in a workout, good poem.

Jared Pickett

Date: 3/8/2010 12:34:00 PM

Are you the death dealer I have been writing about.... Read my "horror" trilogy.... Good work my friend...:JP]