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Radiant Summer

moon pirouettes
over flaming tulips

wearing soft gowns




Andrea Dietrich's Contest
Short Forms For Summer
Part 3 : 5/23/2016

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Jan Allison

May 28, 2016 at 10:00 AM

this is so pretty Nette many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong

May 27, 2016 at 9:20 PM

Back to congratulate you on your high placement Nette. Cheers, Connie ; )

Andrea Dietrich

May 27, 2016 at 9:10 PM

the first two lines were FANTASTICO, Nette. Congrats in my contest.

Paul Callus

May 27, 2016 at 3:03 PM

Back for a second read and to deliver congratulations, Nette! Well done! hugs ~ paul

Karam Misra

May 27, 2016 at 11:47 AM

Nice one, Nette. Congratulations. ~karam~

Lukas Ficklin

May 27, 2016 at 10:19 AM

Congrats nette, a very nice win :)

Paul Callus

May 24, 2016 at 3:10 PM

Oh! this one twirls in lovely imagery, Nette! Well done and a worthy contender in this contest. You did well to put it under senryu...the lovely personification would not have been acceptable in a haiku! hugs // paul