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Radiant Morning

New sun radiates,
  painting the sea bight silver...
     rocks seem huddled sheep!



Entered in Raul Moreno's contest, "Champagne Skies"

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Brian Strand

March 27, 2010 at 1:31 AM

I noticed that too Andrew.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Brian Strand

March 27, 2010 at 12:29 AM

Best wishes in the contest Andrew.Thank you for your welcome blog comments today.Rgds Brian

Marty Owens

March 26, 2010 at 10:22 PM

Very nice Haiku...enjoyed...Marty

Andrea Dietrich

March 26, 2010 at 3:59 PM

Andrew, your birthdate. Give me your birthdate!!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

March 26, 2010 at 3:51 PM

Lovely Andrew and good luck in the contest ..Raul certainly presents some lovely photos for us to write about ..my entry is "Illusions" and I know your Haiku will be among the winners... thankxxx for your comment as pretty as a poem to my eyes and so encouraging too.. my son is doing very well... he called me today... thankxxx for your prayers and support for him Andrew..luv.. Linda-Marie

Debbie Guzzi

March 26, 2010 at 12:57 PM

yes there was a huddling quality! Lovely! Light & love and waiting for my FOREWARD...tickle

Andrea Dietrich

March 26, 2010 at 9:47 AM

this is really wonderful and I bet it's going to do well. Say, when you told me your numbers the other day, is that because you already knew them to be those numbers? I just need to make sure becuase I am doing a followup blog and posting the numbers of all my friends together in one blog. I don't want to get anything wrong on it. Thanks if you can get back with me on that. Luv, Andrea