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New sun radiates, painting the sea bight silver... rocks seem huddled sheep! Entered in Raul Moreno's contest, "Champagne Skies"

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Date: 3/27/2010 1:31:00 AM
I noticed that too Andrew.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 3/27/2010 12:29:00 AM
Best wishes in the contest Andrew.Thank you for your welcome blog comments today.Rgds Brian
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Date: 3/26/2010 10:22:00 PM
Very nice Haiku...enjoyed...Marty
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Date: 3/26/2010 3:59:00 PM
Andrew, your birthdate. Give me your birthdate!!!
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Date: 3/26/2010 3:51:00 PM
Lovely Andrew and good luck in the contest ..Raul certainly presents some lovely photos for us to write about entry is "Illusions" and I know your Haiku will be among the winners... thankxxx for your comment as pretty as a poem to my eyes and so encouraging too.. my son is doing very well... he called me today... thankxxx for your prayers and support for him Andrew..luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 3/26/2010 12:57:00 PM
yes there was a huddling quality! Lovely! Light & love and waiting for my FOREWARD...tickle
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Date: 3/26/2010 9:47:00 AM
this is really wonderful and I bet it's going to do well. Say, when you told me your numbers the other day, is that because you already knew them to be those numbers? I just need to make sure becuase I am doing a followup blog and posting the numbers of all my friends together in one blog. I don't want to get anything wrong on it. Thanks if you can get back with me on that. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 3/26/2010 5:57:00 AM
Great write that should do well in the contest..It is amazing how so many different ideas come from one picture..Sara
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Date: 3/26/2010 12:05:00 AM
A glorious intepretation of the photo, Andrew. Haikus don't work well for me, but you have the art mastered. Good luck in the contest! Love, Carolyn
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