Radiant Flowers-Lune

under the blue sky
greenfield blooms
with radiant flowers.


*picture 5*
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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A. Sharma Avatar
August 16, 2015 at 11:26 PM
What a wonderful imagery olusegun! Congrats on big win!
A   Avatar
August 16, 2015 at 8:59 PM
Olusegun, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~
A  Avatar
August 16, 2015 at 1:30 AM
Olusegun, congratulations in Andrea's "Pretty Little Lunes contest" SKAT Love
Allison Avatar
August 15, 2015 at 7:41 AM
Dropping back with my congratulations:-) hugs Jan xx
Nance Avatar
August 15, 2015 at 7:26 AM
Your poem is radiant, grats on your placing :)
Dietrich Avatar
August 15, 2015 at 1:31 AM
Olusegun, the last line has an extra syllable but that does not diminish the fact that this is a very pretty lune! Congrats in my contest. Loved that line "greenfield blooms"
Onclaud Avatar
August 13, 2015 at 5:29 PM
olu, this is a colorful, vivid oiece.. well done!.. huggs
Muideen Avatar
August 7, 2015 at 5:19 PM
A well written piece, I love your descriptive it is eloquence.......A.M.
Allison Avatar
August 6, 2015 at 2:15 PM
beautifully descriptive - good luck in the contest:-( hugs Jan xx
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