Radiant Beginning

From the middle of the outskirts an angel falls on knee before the beauty of the Good LORD For that angels tears are falling from the beauty, how wonderful is he. God is calling to his mortals calling for the ones who see. The LORD is looking upon the people from which all life has spread and that life is ever humble for the LORD lives in our heart and head. When we all go to see him his outstanding glory we shall hymn. so here is that angel lying on the outskirts of earth and life within, he will look to see the beauty of Jesus who calls to him, God the Father, and his children are not just parts of history for when the rapture is coming closer God the father will call to me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Guzzi Avatar
December 20, 2011 at 7:05 AM
Dear Jesse, Just a note to let you know no verse can place in a contest when labeled "I don't know?" Your poems form is either Rhyme or Verse [You can always use Verse as the form label ;)] Now,all words more than 3 letters in a title are to be capitalized. Also review your write for where each thought ends and give it a [.] Happy Holy Days Light & Love
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October 26, 2011 at 5:26 PM
I hear a great comfort from a power greater than us. I like the message of devotion. It's a great first poem.
Kaler Avatar
October 26, 2011 at 5:54 PM
ernie its not my first poem its my first rhyming poem i have 187 other poems that have no rhyme
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