Race Against Time

inching forward home
hoping seagulls nowhere found
low tide threatens me



Entry in Journey contest.
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Austin Avatar
May 29, 2012 at 2:42 PM
This one really flies, Joe. Congrats on the selection. daver
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April 24, 2010 at 1:42 PM
A RACE BY ME NEVER WON !!!IRMA
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April 24, 2010 at 1:40 PM
Nice use of imagery. I like the personal feel. Best wishes with this one. Thank you for your kind comment. Karen
Nutter Avatar
April 24, 2010 at 8:44 AM
Nice entry in the contest, best of luck
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